COMPOSITION

when i was younger,I went with my friends on a trip.We went to a little hill,near Berga.In the morning was shining,when we werw walking.We were very tired.My friends and I lost a ball.The ball was very beautiful,amd we were very sad.
Two weeks ago,I went to the mountain with my bicycle,while I was riding on the bike,I saw a llitle ball,in three trees.I knew the ball,and I catched the ball.At night,I met my friends,and I explained them the story.First my friens didn't remember,but when I explained the sotory,they remembered.